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Author: | monibandi [ 23 Apr 2013 18:59 ] |
Post subject: | Black Beauty - 'Practice makes perfect' |
“PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT” Part 1 – Chapter 15 The descriptions of the horses are very precise, accurate and detailed, so as a good cartoonist could easily make a sketch: ‘In the stall next to mine stood a little fat gray pony, with a thick mane and tail, a very pretty head, and a pert little nose.’ ‘(…) the ears were laid back, and the eye looked rather ill-tempered. This was a tall chestnut mare, with a long handsome neck.’ Even personality adjectives can be attached to the horses based on their descriptions: Marrylegs: ‘I am very handsome. (…) They think a great deal of me’ = vain Ginger: ‘(…) has a bad habit of biting and snapping’= moody If we were to play a little bit with these descriptions, a diamond shape poem will do it: Marrylegs handsome, little cheat-chatting, easy-going, good-looking cheerful, plucky, self-confident, cheeky snapping, biting, jumping ill-tempered, not friendly Ginger Diamond shape poem Subject 2 adjectives describing the subject 3 words ending in ‘ing’ telling about the subject 4 words (1st two describe the subjectm the last 2 its opposite) 3 words ending in ‘ing’ telling about the opposite 2 adjectives describing the opposite Opposite Chapter 15 (Part 1) deals with a chain of events that can start from a thoughtless action and can end in tragedy. At the end of the chapter there is a nice conclusion to all these that is well illustrated in a nursey rhyme, too. “A man’s life and a horse’s life are worth more than a fox’s tail; at least, I should say they ought to be” = For Want of a Nail (nursery rhyme) For want of a nail the shoe was lost For want of a shoe the horse was lost For want of a horse the rider was lost For want of the rider the battle was lost For want of a battle the kingdom was lost And all for the want of a horseshoe nail |
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